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"It was one of those nights when you turn off the lights
And everythin' comes into view"

[color=#000000]"Dearly beloved[/color]
[color=#000000]We are gathered here today[/color]
[color=#000000]To get through this thing called life"[/color]

[color=#000000]"Help me, I think I'm falling, in love again"[/color]

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[quote name='Bilbo' timestamp='1442999793' post='2871222']
Dawn of light lying between a silence and sold sources,
Chased amid fusions of wonder
In moments hardly seen forgotten,
Coloured in pastures of chance
Dancing leaves cast spells of
Challenge,
Amused but real in thought,
We fled from the sea whole.
Dawn of thought transferred through moments of days undersearching
Earth
Revelaing corridors of time, provoking memories,
Disjointed but with purpose,
Craving penetrations offer links with the self-instructors sharp
And tender love
As we took to the air, a picture of distance.
Dawn of our power we amuse redescending as fast as misused
Expression,
As only to teach love as to reveal passion chasing
Late into corners,
And we danced from the ocean.
Dawn of love sent within us colours of awakening among the many
Won't to follow,
Only tunes of a different age.
As the links span our endless caresses for the freedom of life
Everlasting.
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Not often are you gonna get tales from topographic oceans quotes around here..well played sir.

Also loving the Warren Zevon lines, that guy was a classy wordsmith.

The one that sprang to mind when I read the thread header is:

So here I am once more
In the playground of the Broken hearts
One more experience, one more entry
from a diary, self penned

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