If you're going to use nothing but quotes, at least make them accurate. If you start completely changing their point willy-nilly, your 'argument' instantly loses all credibility. You may as well change all their "will"s to "won't"s and "is"s to "isn't"s. In fact, how do we know that you haven't?
https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/246567-modern-americans-behave-as-if-intelligence-were-some-sort-of