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Good evening, ambient...
I listened to the composition; congratulations on the result so far, even if, as you say, it's 'work in progress'. I hesitate to comment in any depth, even less advance any 'critique'; I'd have to declare my complete ignorance as to the finer (or even coarser..!) points of modern composition, and wouldn't want to lead you astray in your works. I have a few questions for you, though, if you will...
Is this your first piece..?
Do you have any restrictions or obligations to be taken into account..?
How long is the final piece supposed to last..?
How much time do you have before completion deadline (...and, if it's next week, why are you messing about on this forum..? )
I'll happily chat by PM if you wish, but with the firm understanding that I'm a first-class heavyweight chump, and should not be relied upon as a guiding beacon. More a spent match, really, now I think about it.
Well done for posting, of course; I'm sure you'll get more erudite replies from the experts here.
I'll follow progress, if you don't mind...
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Hi man,
Thanks for spending the time to listen to it and reply.
It's my first stand alone piece, I've done strings for songs before, which is a lot easier because you have something to work to.
It's got to be handed in middle of January, but I have so many other things to do as well as this. I spent most of the afternoon and evening working on this and a film score for an orchestra that has to be handed in at the same time. My plan is to leave both now, and come back to them in a couple of days time, hopefully with kind of a fresh perspective on them.
I can sometimes hear where the pieces are joined together. The first 40 or so bars were recorded weeks ago, then the next 40 or so today, and I copied and pasted the ending form another section, mainly because I wanted to go back to it.
That's kinda why I wanted other musical people to listen to it, to see if it works as one piece.