June Composition Challenge

[Stub Mandrel]

23 hours ago, upside downer said:

 

Thank you, David Jacobs 😁

 

Was a comment on the 'poetry' not the music* 😁

 

 

Which sounded like JJ Burnell and the Cure doing pop music.

[upside downer]

10 minutes ago, Stub Mandrel said:

Was a comment on the 'poetry' not the music* 😁

 

One man's Larkin is another man's larking. It's a fine line 😉

 

12 minutes ago, Stub Mandrel said:

Which sounded like JJ Burnell and the Cure doing pop music.

 

Oooh! I'll take that, guv'nor 👍

[Al Nico]

@upside downer "UFO, are you friend or foe?" That's a strong line. Nice guitar / bass arrangement.

[Al Nico]

@AndyTravis Drums are powerful and sound great and work well with the dark backing that also has a touch of tension. Nice.

[lurksalot]

Wow , the months just flash by , I’ve got a basis sorted , I need to get some lyrics on it, but I’ll get something done.

 

[Dad3353]

31 minutes ago, lurksalot said:

... I need to get some lyrics on it.

 

[Sigh..!] Such a pity; it could have been soooooo nice. 

 

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[lurksalot]

2 hours ago, Dad3353 said:

 

[Sigh..!] Such a pity; it could have been soooooo nice. 

 

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now then, I didn’t say I’d be singing the lyrics 😘 😁

[Leonard Smalls]

10 hours ago, lurksalot said:

I didn’t say I’d be singing the lyrics

Happy to sing 'em for you!

 

[Dad3353]

1 hour ago, Leonard Smalls said:

Happy to sing 'em for you!

 

 You'd be the only bloomin' one..! 

[lurksalot]

6 hours ago, Leonard Smalls said:

Happy to sing 'em for you!

 

 

4 hours ago, Dad3353 said:

 You'd be the only bloomin' one..! 

I’d be happy too as well , but they haven’t really got much of a melody , so it wont really sound like singing ….

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

waits for Douglas to say that it never does sound like singing     

Edited 48 minutes ago by lurksalot

[Dad3353]

It never does sound like singing. 

 

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