Zoe_BillySheehan Posted March 23, 2009 Share Posted March 23, 2009 [url="http://www.myspace.com/zoeheslopbass"]www.myspace.com/zoeheslopbass [/url] I'd really appreciate it if some of you would have a listen to these there mostly just to try out this little plug in thing i bought, works very well for £15 Thankyou Zoe xXx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Funk Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 I like [i]Zoe's Bass 2[/i]. I just wish you'd bring that opening riff back into it somewhere - it's too good to just throw away like that. Your time's pretty good and it grooves hard! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YouMa Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 (edited) I think your timing is good as well zoe,you have layered the tracks nicely,you are sounding a lot more experienced than your 17 years. Good solid playing. Edited March 24, 2009 by YouMa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zoe_BillySheehan Posted March 24, 2009 Author Share Posted March 24, 2009 Hey wow cheers!! the first tracks out of time, it was just testin out the plug in by layering up some tracks, but for some reason i didn't use a metronome, or drumtrack, then I added a drum track afterwards, bit silly really! thanks again! Zo x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Funk Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 You may as well just re-record the bass parts for the first one. You should force yourself to turn the second one into a full on song with vocals. Just come up with a vocal melody and then try fitting some words to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zoe_BillySheehan Posted March 24, 2009 Author Share Posted March 24, 2009 [quote name='The Funk' post='444088' date='Mar 24 2009, 06:41 PM']You may as well just re-record the bass parts for the first one. You should force yourself to turn the second one into a full on song with vocals. Just come up with a vocal melody and then try fitting some words to it.[/quote] That would be awesome.... but theres a problem... I can't sing...at all haha Z x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Funk Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 [quote name='Zoe_BillySheehan' post='444093' date='Mar 24 2009, 06:43 PM']That would be awesome.... but theres a problem... I can't sing...at all haha Z x[/quote] Neither can I, seriously. But I write about half of the lyrics and vocal melodies for my band's material. Even if you can't sing, you should still try to come up with something. If you're not in a band right now, then start one (with people who actually like real rock) and get them to cowrite it with you. As you've done most of the hard work on your own, I think you may as well finish it on your own. Songwriting's tough but so much more rewarding (for me anyway) than practising arpeggios all day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zoe_BillySheehan Posted March 24, 2009 Author Share Posted March 24, 2009 [quote name='The Funk' post='444160' date='Mar 24 2009, 07:34 PM']Neither can I, seriously. But I write about half of the lyrics and vocal melodies for my band's material. Even if you can't sing, you should still try to come up with something. If you're not in a band right now, then start one (with people who actually like real rock) and get them to cowrite it with you. As you've done most of the hard work on your own, I think you may as well finish it on your own. Songwriting's tough but so much more rewarding (for me anyway) than practising arpeggios all day.[/quote] Yeah, pretty good idea. I'm in a punk band at the moment. but im into all sorts, classic rock mostly! Kiss, motley crue, aerosmith, new york dolls, hanoi rocks, enuff zunff etc.. Z x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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