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I like:

1. the guitar line
2. the ending
3. the off-beat stabs that happen every now and then (do you know what I mean?)
4. the drum fills

I'd change:

1. the drum groove - I've thought of one which I'd love to hear underneath the main guitar riff (it's a bit different to the kick-snare | kick-snare | thing happening but you guys might hate it).

Everything else seemed fine to me. Does that help? Punk's not my genre so I can't say if I love it or hate it.

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[quote name='The Funk' post='387008' date='Jan 20 2009, 11:33 PM']I like:

1. the guitar line
2. the ending
3. the off-beat stabs that happen every now and then (do you know what I mean?)
4. the drum fills

I'd change:

1. the drum groove - I've thought of one which I'd love to hear underneath the main guitar riff (it's a bit different to the kick-snare | kick-snare | thing happening but you guys might hate it).

Everything else seemed fine to me. Does that help? Punk's not my genre so I can't say if I love it or hate it.[/quote]


Could you explain what you would change with the drums? I'm interested.

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I like it... and I know my mate (who is more into this kind of punk/rock than I am) would really like it. Seems a well-written song.

The only thing that grinded on me a little was that the two sets of vocals were a wee bit out of sync with each other. Not quite at the point of being an echo but not quite sounding like you're singing together. I don't agree with you that they're "woeful" though - that's too harsh.

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